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End of the Year Writing Reflection

As a writer, at the beginning of the year, I believed that a great essay contained a lot of background information but I was misinformed on how to use this within essays. Instead, what I would do is just merely summarize the text as shown in my colonial essay written in October, Mrs.Nagi told me to "condense some of this retelling of the process for more analysis" much of my essays contained loads of retelling with little analysis and this was a habit that I started off at the beginning of the year. My essay structure and openers were always good and I was able to show good organization skills throughout the years. A common problem within my essay that was not fixed to my full abilities was grammar and standard English conventions, I misspelled also of words throughout my essay and this should of have been because it made it hard for my essay to be read and it took away professionalism from my essay. A passage that showed how my writing improved was the rhetorical analysis